Began edits. Not as bad as I feared for a first draft but I think I will have to re-write the 1st chapter, begin with the murder scene. I hate when I have to pitch things altogether.
Aiden needs to be stronger, more memorable and more dangerous.
More on Mumsie's abilities as well as Tali's.
Whole book may need a little more darkness.
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